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"Two Edens" by Simon Leonard


Residual feelings


The day before Eden ended,

she spent mostly staring

out of windows, observing stretch marks

scar the sky, trees hunker down

in dusky, unconvinced gravel, a litter

of leaves grow in the stubble

of their shade. You had to delve deep

for moisture here, or hope

to extract it from the damp.

Other Eves paraded

their Adams in tow, perfecting obliviousness

to termites working just under the bark. She would

wish them better luck, leave them furniture

that couldn’t fit: chewed chairs,

wardrobes, their doors hanging slack, shrugging even

against that memory-testing, first spurt

of Ikea enthusiasm; kitchen units contriving

to belong better in a holiday flat

in Benidorm than her best attempt

at a proper home—background

to arguments played out

before imaginary juries, children yawning

from sheer discomfort.

Little to divide,

a lot to abandon, this Eden was an empty tube

of toothpaste, disconcerting only because,

through the habit of squeezing,

there had always seemed to be

that little bit more, something residual.



A terrier in his Eden


Workmen came. He watched them measure

out grass with abstract, hairy curiosity.

Their leader stretched his body

around imaginary trunks to demonstrate

how six, maybe seven could fit,

parked sensibly. The others sloped, semi-convinced.

This was a job to do so that other jobs could get done —

covering contingencies.

Then they bedded the lawn with a carpet of tar.

He waited for the last ribbed wheel to labour away

for a first, formal sniff. Caustic, simian trickery, this —

he nosed out quickly where corners curled,

revealing suppressed life: offered it a preliminary scratch.

Not easy, but with that canine certainty

that the surface is something to be worked

through, mere clusters of matter clinging

together, desperate bonds begging

to be simplified: specific, obdurate, volatile,

he sensed tiny spaces cede

into gaps, snuffed turgid fibres relaxing,

webbing the fabric of a wound;

he would worry at its scab, scent

where its ridges peeled away

from flesh, tenuous tissues unravelling

into reluctant filaments, blending nails into hair.

By the time the police arrived, unhitched themselves

from official upholstery with uniformed parsimony,

the prophet was up to his wrists in truth.

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